To start off, The story line is just so intriguing and it makes you want to read more and not stop till the very end. Right now I am reading the re- I don't usually make these kinds of huge statements but, This is the best frickin' book I have ever read on Wattpad. Right now I am reading the re-written version, so I have only read till chapter 18, the latest posted chapter atm.
I can't wait to read more of this fantastic book. And can we just take a moment and appreciate the characters? Each and every character is so unique and funny and yes. Especially Death. Best hero EVA! And ohmygosh. The way he handled Little Faith was just so cute.
Trust me, I really like David, but bad guys always win in my world. Can't wait to read the other books. View 2 comments. Apr 26, Luce rated it it was amazing. Ridiculously good and deep, the plot twists got me everytime but I managed not to get lost in all the D's Oh man, this got me good, laughing out loud more than I should, the cynical remarks and sarcasm were perfect. Amazing job for a teenager. I was never more fascinatedby Death than I am now and to make it even worse, I'm carving some cupcake.
Quote worthy book. I read it a long time ago but I remember loving this series. The characters were well developed and it had a interesting and unique plot. Aug 01, Lexy rated it it was amazing. I had this book on my Wattpad For a while and just finished it now and it was a good book I actually started it last week. Dec 13, Scotia88 rated it really liked it. I do not normally review many books, however this is one of my favourite series and is written by a really marvellous young writer.
I hesitated to only rate "Death is My BFF" with only four stars and not provide full five stars, however, I believe the writer would like honestly above all in these reviews.
The reason behind this rating is that although this story is truly awesome and a page-turner, it really is a rough draft and I know what Katrocks is capable of writing as seen in her latest I do not normally review many books, however this is one of my favourite series and is written by a really marvellous young writer. The reason behind this rating is that although this story is truly awesome and a page-turner, it really is a rough draft and I know what Katrocks is capable of writing as seen in her latest two stories in the series, "Death is My Friend With Benefits" and "Death is My Soul Mate" respectively.
Faith Williams is a strong, well-written female protagonist that is refreshing in the sea of badly written female characters that exist today. The reader can really relate to her and see her grow from a high schooler to a young adult by the end of this first book in the series. Death is well, I like to think of as an anti-hero who borders between being the guy you want Faith to end up with to being the guy you love to hate read the whole series to understand why. He's a guy with an agenda and we don't have any idea if he is the bad guy or the good guy in this book.
He's the guy that you love to hate but don't at the same time and the reader will find themselves still routing for him. This book has grammatical errors and such, and sometimes the writing can be confusing however please do not let this stop you from reading the entire series from start to finish. The writer of this book is currently working on editing this first story to change and update it to her current standards.
For someone who wrote this first draft at the age of , it is a great book and a wonderful start to a truly unique and awesome series. Oct 10, Sarah Aye rated it it was ok Shelves: annoying-books. Aug 31, Veeneck rated it it was ok. This will be a cumulative review of both the old books and the rewritten series. I genuinely enjoyed them when I was younger however not so much now.
The old series is a really rough draft and quite honestly the idea itself is very interesting. However, I've felt that the story was vague and unpolished.
I had no idea what was going on, which is fine its a rough draft! Grammar and sentence structure need a lot of work and plot development.
The character interactions, especially between Death and This will be a cumulative review of both the old books and the rewritten series. The character interactions, especially between Death and Faith were honestly the best part of it. I loved the attitude, the snark, Death's cynicism, all of it was just so entertaining.
Especially between Marcy and Thomas, Faith's religious family which I absolutely need an even bigger emphasis on and her Aunt! Now in the new rewritten series, these characters are lost! Sure, they're mentioned here and there, but thats just it. Now for the rewritten series, it is far better than the original, grammar and sentence structure improved, a much more tolerable narrative voice although sometimes Faith can just be so darn stubborn and annoying which isn't good since in the original you can vaguely get the feel it was written by a snarky teenager.
Now that Kat has grown, Faith does feel a bit more mature, however still retaining that teenage vibe. But I'll be honest here, Faith and Deaths relationship is just so But that was all traded for Death being a "complex" character True, the Angel of Death tormenting you for your soul isn't going to be the best thing ever, but damn.
It's a drawn out relationship in the original series, which worked because I felt Death and Faith actually got to know each other. The rewritten rushes it with sexual innuendos everywhere and some of the interactions between the two physically made me cringe and not want to pick the book back up.
He's a potential villain turned love interest, but don't blur the line! Don't justify certain actions because he's messed up, and don't have Faith run to try and fix him. And having Faith keep trying to define their relationship in almost every single chapter was I want them both to be present in each others lives, to be happy and to have a romance thats unique to their situation.
But their own stubbornness makes them both so intolerable together like how are they really meant for each other? What are they for each other? How do you expect me to root for them if they can't compromise? I guess since its still a work in progress many things are left unknown. The plot to me, even now is still a big???? What even is happening? Where are they? What exists and what doesn't?
Big questions that need answers. Especially regarding Faith. When does her religious background come to play? What is she? Why is she so important? Two revised version of the original and still nothing.
In the rewritten Faith develops super powers because? How is she a major plot point? How does she tip the balance between good and evil? See what I mean? I have a romantic relationship thats taking shape but not in the best way possible, with two characters where one is somewhat developed, while the other a mystery and some change.
Death's backstory in the original is kinda melodramatic but made his character development reasonable, whereas in the rewritten it's short and straight to the point, but also entirely too vague. Devin was one of his only friends yet entirely abandoned, along with every other side character that isn't a part of some punchline. I want these cast of characters to have relevance to the story again, besides to be comic relief.
I need some better world building. And less word vomit conversations that sound good but have zero relevance to the topic. It would also be good if something happened. Most chapters felt so drawn out, as if nothing is set in stone and everything is hyped meanwhile nothing is happening. Just tell me already. There's honestly so much filler its frustrating. I hope to see more lore, especially the building blocks that makes Faith so special and what play does religion have.
And I want a relationship that isn't so detrimental to all characters involved. I will still continue reading the books because I've been there since book 3 and I just want to know where it all ends. I know my review does sound a bit harsh but I honestly want Kat to do well with the series because it really was interesting.
And I know she can make interesting stories but she needs to work on keeping things cohesive and not entirely vague. Dec 12, Maria rated it liked it. The story is amazing, to put it lightly! It just needs editing, but nothing major. When you look past that and actually READ the story and get into the plot, you are taken to a whole knew world. The characters are different and the storyline in general is very unique.
There's humor, action, drama and romance, it's like the perfect combo!! I definitely recommend it and I hope to see these entire series published someday because it really does have a lot of potential. Five stars and a Watty Award The story is amazing, to put it lightly! Five stars and a Watty Award well deserved!
Dec 14, Lorene Sanders rated it it was amazing. These books are are so well written, that the Reader will be enthralled and captivated by such detail and description it will have them on edge begging for more. These books are filled with action, horror, fantasy, humor, and also twisted and torn emotions of love. Death Is My BFF These books are are so well written, that the Reader will be enthralled and captivated by such detail and description it will have them on edge begging for more.
Kat has really created an intoxicating world for her story. Her characters are flawed, but perfect, charming, but dangerous. Kat has proven that she is an amazing writer with this book. Why do Indonesian consider the gamelan sacred?
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Are collies mean? Trending Questions. Give me food and I will live give me water and I will die what am I? He was right, I was. How the hell could I find the confidence to do something so intimate? He titled his head, his jaw ticking.
If I'm going to have your ass in my face, I think red would be the most thought-provoking. I stood up, nearly throwing my chair back. I'm sure as hell not taking my clothes off in front of you!
You knocked me down in a petty way! You—you should be ashamed at how dumb it was! I wanted to punch him in his perfect nose. He leaned his gorgeous, pierced features close and stacked my empty plate on top of his. Breathing me in, he analyzed my features with those wicked eyes, a wry smile pulling at his lips. To your virginity, I mean. I suffer terribly from too big cock syndrome. My mouth fell open. Death barked out laughter. It's time for your meditation.
And sweatpants. Where have I been????? I'm in the early stages of editing, but have finished about 14 chapters already!
I'm VERY excited about this, it's turning out so good!!!!! My Twitter is "katrocks" ;. The Watty Awards. Try Premium.
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